Review my lyrics pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee…

It is hard to understand the true meaning of the song by this particular lyrics alone. I can see a little potential in the construction of the song. But the lyrics are too vague. too short and need more detail to get the point across. I have written many songs. I am not just saying this out of the blue. A pro critic would not even consider it. That's how they are. the first few songs I sent the ociations, I was told they were mediocre at best. They needed great songs not just good songs.